Daily Dose
Great News Town, a mystery/thriller about a fictional Illinois town that is terrorized by a serial killer, opens on June 26, 1984. So on June 26, 2012, a free, serialized version of the book was launched on this Web site. Weekly installments are posted on Thursdays. Check back often.
Chi-town meets Great News Town
This weekend the Windy City welcomes the return of the book that spawned this serial killer serial. Great News Town will be featured at the Printers Row Literary Festival, one of the largest book festivals in the country. The story began in the Chicago suburbs back in the 1980s with a series of murders in Joliet. From 2-6 p.m. Sunday, author Sue Merrell will be signing copies of Great News Town and One Shoe Off in a tent sponsored by the Chicago Writers Association.If you stop by, be sure to say you read about it on GNT: The Serial Killer Serial.
Chapter 111
Josie
was so excited as she pulled into the parking lot behind the ceramic shop that
she started shouting as soon as she entered the open back door.
“He did it! Kevin made a goal!”
But
when she stepped from the bright sunlight into the dim stairwell leading down
six steps to the studio, she saw something that silenced her enthusiasm.
“Barb?”
She
could make out a figure crumpled at the bottom of the stairs.
“Su, help me,” she hollered as she rushed to
Barb’s body. “Something has—”
As she
rolled her friend over, horror grabbed the voice from her throat. Barb’s head
lolled back like a rag doll that has lost some of its stuffing and blood gushed
from the grotesque red smile just below her chin. Barb’s eyes were open wide in
disbelief.
Josie
wanted to scream but no sound would come. Her mouth moved as if trying to pump
up words from deep inside. She turned and saw blood and broken pieces of
half-finished pottery everywhere. Penny lay awkwardly over the table, her head
surrounded by the puddle of blood that oozed from her throat.
A moan
pulled Josie’s attention to the right and she could see a pair of feet sticking
out of the bathroom. Josie stumbled over
Barb and the chunks of shattered Christmas tree and fairly fell on Aggie in the
bathroom. There was hardly any blood on her, no seeping streak of red across
her neck, just a perfectly round hole in the middle of her forehead.
“Aggie! Aggie, can you hear me?”
The
old woman was unconscious but moaned again.
“I’ll get help.” Josie headed for the phone at
the front counter. As she started through the shelves of greenware, she passed
Su’s body, bent in half, looking perfectly delicate except for the circle of
red that surrounded her. Josie didn’t slow to check her but stumbled on to the
phone, looking back in horror to see her footprints tracking through the blood.
Her footprints and someone else’s.
She
ran right into him, a mountain of a man standing at the register, one purse
dangling from his neck, one at his elbow, and his hands stuffing dollars from
the register into the third purse.
Josie
squealed in surprise and Malcolm chuckled with macabre satisfaction. Josie
turned and ran, past Su slumped against the greenware, around Penny teetering
on the table. She was just about to leap over Barb at the base of the stairs
when a huge arm encircled her waist and yanked her into the air.
“No! Put me down,” Josie screamed, finding her
voice at last. She flailed her arms and legs wildly as Malcolm whirled her
around, laughing as though playing with a squirming child. In her fight to
break free, one of Josie’s jerking feet found its mark in the big man’s groin,
and he threw her to the floor as he bent in pain.
Josie
crawled a few feet to the base of one of the rolling pottery shelves. Without
thinking, she grabbed one of Barb’s gigantic porcelain bowls, whipped around
and hit the still bent Malcolm Jones in the head. He stumbled backward a few
steps, enough that Josie probably could have made it up the nearby stairs, but
an odd rage possessed her. Unaccustomed power heightened her senses and a
strange feeling of invincibility vanquished any fear.
“That’s for Barb,” she thought as the bowl
shattered. Then she turned and grabbed one of Penny’s gnome cookie jars, so big
that it took two hands for Josie to pick it up.
“And that’s for Penny,” she screamed as she
threw the heavy piece. It glanced off the madman’s back.
Malcolm shot up to full height and growled
like an angry bear. No longer was he having fun. His switchblade glinted in his
right hand and he lunged at Josie, barely nicking her leg as she ran around
behind the shelf, grabbing pieces of pottery and slinging them as she went.
Even Su’s dainty butterflies, which could sting no more than a mosquito bite,
sailed toward his advancing hulk. Aggie’s delicate designs bounced off his
shoulder and exploded on the floor.
In the
rage that gripped her, it seemed that each of her dead friends was placing
weapons in her hands. The china shop was avenging itself on the bull.
Amid
the pelting of pottery, Malcolm slashed at Josie, pushing her back to the wall
by the shelves of heavy greenware until she was trapped in a corner. She had
nothing more to throw and no outlet for escape. Malcolm paused to laugh at his
triumph.
“Father,
help me,” Josie breathed, looking into the madman’s eyes. Pressed against the concrete block wall, she
reached an arm behind the shelves of
greenware. She felt something solid, a water pipe, and pulled.
Just as Malcolm stabbed toward her with all
his weight, Josie disappeared, slipping into the imperceptible space between
the shelf and the wall as miraculously as a newborn emerges from a
ten-centimeter opening.
Frustrated,
Malcolm poked at her behind the shelf but his beefy arms were too big to reach her
as she slithered up the backs of the metal shelves.
Through
the shadowy greenware, Josie could see Malcolm straining like Hercules to pull
the shelf away from the wall. Feeling the shelf start to move, Josie grabbed a
water pipe overhead and straightened her legs, pushing against the top shelf
with all her strength. The unit wavered and then toppled forward with a
thunderous crash.
Dangling
from the water pipe like a kid on monkey bars, Josie saw a streak of movement
through the torrent of ceramic shards. Malcolm Jones had escaped.
No
longer thinking of her own safety, Josie dropped to the floor and started after
him. Beyond the register she could see that the front door was open. Had it
been standing ajar before? She couldn’t remember.
She
ran to the door and looked both ways but could see no one. She was turning back
into the room to call police when Malcolm slammed her head into the doorframe,
practically knocking her out.
“Where you goin’, bitch?” he whispered with
eerie calm. He pulled her back into the room, closed the door, and bolted
it.
“It’s my turn,” he said pushing her up against
the counter. Her face was bloodied now, one side swelling where she had hit the
doorframe. His lips curled into a
hideous grin, but his dark eyes lacked the fire of madness Josie had seen
before. Instead, as he lifted the knife to her throat, she saw sadness in his
brown eyes . . . and hesitation. Two words flashed into her mind, words Duke
had said when she wasn’t listening but that somehow had stuck with her for
their incongruity.
“Good
boy,” she choked out. “Good boy.”
Startled,
Malcolm lessened his grip enough that she slipped under his arm and tried to
run back into the studio. He grabbed her
wrist. She whirled around and threw one last piece of pottery, the heavy
earthenware vase that Su had said could be a hammer.
Perhaps
it was her aim, or the way Malcolm jerked to one side, or maybe it was a
guardian angel’s doing, but the vase missed Malcolm entirely and sailed like a
vandal’s brick through the plate glass window at the front of the store. The
lights seemed to flicker as the glass shattered in slow motion, the break
creeping in all directions with a crackling noise as it painted a spider web on the pane.
The
shock seemed to stop Malcolm and Josie for a split second. Then Malcolm’s fist
exploded into Josie’s face, and everything went black.
COMING JUNE 12: The final confrontation. Who will survive? Josie? Malcolm? What will be the final play that makes all the pieces fit?
Chapter 110
When
no one answered Barb’s question, Su Le went to investigate. Perhaps she had a
customer. Barb and Penny turned their attention to their projects and Aggie
closed the door on the restroom.
Suddenly,
Malcolm burst into the studio, his big arm wrapped around Su so her upper body
almost disappeared in his grip. In the other hand, he held a small gun.
“Oh, my God,” Penny said.
“What the—” Barb jumped to her feet.
“Sit down and shut up!” Malcolm said in a
gruff voice.
“No way, you bum.” Barb lunged across the
table. Malcolm tightened his grip on Su and met Barb’s forehead with his gun.
“No, please, no!” Su said. “Just take the
money and go.”
“You! Take that tape over there and tape that
bitch’s mouth shut.” Malcolm pushed Su in the direction of a roll of duct tape
sitting atop the boxes of clay. Barb
locked eyes with the determined man and saw a spark of madness that made her
step back.
“I’ll be quiet,” she said.
“Tape her mouth,” Malcolm repeated. “And her
arms, too. Over here, sit over here.” He tapped the back of one of the metal
folding chairs with his gun.
Su
pulled a little bit of tape off the roll, then told Malcolm she needed to get
the scissors. She walked to the cabinet by the back door and Malcolm followed
her. When she opened the drawer a little, he yanked it from her hand and sent
the contents spilling across the floor. She screamed and jumped away from him.
“Pick up the scissors,” he said pointing to a
pair in the middle of the floor. “Just don’t try anything stupid.”
“No, no,” Su said, holding her hands up. “We
not do anything stupid. You take the money now. You go.”
“Tape up your friends first,” Malcolm said
motioning with his gun.
Su did
as she was told, first Barb and then Penny, a strip of tape across the mouth, a
couple of bands around the arms and the
back of the chair. Penny was whimpering.
“We mothers,” Su said. “She has little ones.
You no hurt mothers.”
“No one’s going to get hurt if you do as I
say,” Malcolm said, his voice rising.
“Now bring me the purses.”
Su
picked up the two purses on the floor by Penny. Suddenly she remembered Aggie
in the restroom. Her eyes caught Penny’s.
“Bring ’em here, and that one, too.” Malcolm
indicated Barb’s small purse hanging on the back of the chair. Su took the three purses to Malcolm. Hers was
in the front room, under the cash register, but maybe he wasn’t counting.
Malcolm
hung the small purse over his neck and opened up one of the bigger ones.
“Okay, let’s empty that cash register into
here,” he said, handing the purse to Su. She was walking forward hesitantly to
take the outstretched purse when the restroom door opened.
Lightning
fast, Malcolm spun and shot toward the unexpected sound. The bullet hit Aggie
smack in the middle of the splotch of green paint on her forehead. The force
blew her body back into the tiny restroom.
‘Now, look what you made me do,” he grumbled.
What
happened next seemed in slow motion, each reaction, each movement seeming
separate and yet somehow all happening at once.
Penny
jumped up with so much adrenalin that she fell, chair and all, across the
table, sending a half-painted Christmas tree crashing to the floor. Su took advantage of the distraction to lurch
into the aisles of greenware.
“Damn bitches,” Malcolm shouted, turning to
chase after Su. His big arm reached out and grabbed her long ponytail. She
screamed as he pulled her to the ground.
“Stupid, stupid,” he said with an evil
chuckle. He yanked Su up until her face
was just under his goatee and looked her in the eye. Pulling a switchblade from his pocket, he
slashed her throat with such force that he almost severed her head.
Violence
seemed to feed him like stoking a flame, and he roared with delight. Penny was rolling helplessly about amid the
soft clay pieces on the table and couldn’t see what had happened to Su, but
Barb could see and started pushing herself backward in the chair, trying to get
away.
Malcolm
grabbed Penny by the hair.
“Look
at the mess you’re making,” he chided, and slit her throat, too.
“Now,
who’s going to clean this up?” he said, as he headed toward Barb.
COMING JUNE 5 -- When Josie returns from the soccer match, what will she find in the ceramic studio?
Great News Town on Kobo
Canadian fans, there's great news. Great News Town is now available on Kobo. If you've only caught a few chapters in GNT: The Serial Killer Serial and you want to get the whole story, you'll find it available in paperback and various ebook formats. Kobo is the latest addition. Welcome Kobo fans!
The end is near!
Can't you just feel it? The excitement mounting? The solution to the Cornfield Killer murders is close. The two-year serial will end on June 19.That's 10 more chapters. Don't miss one! Think you know how it will end? Go ahead. Post your comments. See if you can beat Duke and Josie.
Did we mention -- Honorably?
Great News Town is highlighted in the current issue of Writers' Digest Magazine as an honorable mention in their Self-Published Book Awards. You'll find it listed under Genre Fiction. That covers a huge assortment of books so just making the mentioned-at-all list is quite an honor. You can get a taste of Great News Town right here... not only this week's chapter but up to 10 earlier chapters in the archive! The mystery is just about to be solved!
Happy New Year!
Faithful readers of GNT:The Serial Killer Serial are well into the second year of the weekly serial and nearing the climax of the tale. But, don't worry, your new friends in Jordan live on. Great News Town is the first book in a mystery series. All your favorite newspaper characters return in One Shoe Off. The third book in the series, Full Moon Friday, will be released in June. It's going to be a great new year!
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